Viva la Vi

Vibrant, Verbose, Voracious

1. Rambler 11.26.07 / 11pm

   I think its a little bit of self love which keeps the niggling fear afloat in the minds.

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2. Parth 11.27.07 / 1pm

   The muddled despise those with clarity. Nicely summarized. I like the brevity of this short, and the emotion it conveys so succintly and to the point. Its an interesting challenge. Maybe more 55 word shorts are in order? You know me: the briefer the better.

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3. Vi 11.27.07 / 1pm

   Rambler: Self-love? Maybe.

   Parth: Is it really clarity, or narrow-mindedness?

   You’re right, more fifty-five word shorts are in order. Indeed, this was originally a fifty-five word short. But it seemed incomplete. Not that it’s much longer now; I think there are probably ten or so extra words.

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4. Parth 11.27.07 / 2pm

   Perhaps its neither. Its just a way of life. Some people like definition, perhaps need definition.

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5. Sreejith 11.27.07 / 6pm

   but then the niggling fear keeps you on your toes…

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6. asuph 11.28.07 / 3am

   touche’

   very profound!

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7. Renovatio 11.28.07 / 8am

   It’s a risk you take, no different from any risk you take with anyone else you don’t detest, for in time you will.

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8. Vidya 11.28.07 / 10am

   Lovely. Well put.

   I agree with Renovatio totally there. It indeed is difficult loving anyone, for everyone has something or the other that we might end up despising.

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